ahh i think ive got it,
the depth has to be in parallel with the ldr, i just changed the depth pot to 100k and seems much better...goes from completely off ( same as bypassed) to full depth

probably get away with a 47-50k..really
the lfo is fine, goes from really slow to fast...i swapped C4 for a 4.7uf, nicer 'useable' range now too..
as a test i lifted the depth pot compared to full depth and there was no differences...brilliant!..
edit: thers a nice difference in shape with using a blue led, compared to a red diffused led, the red diffused has a nice softer pulse, wheras the blue is choppier..