Hi "nation",
couple things:
1) If you don't want loud, what is the purpose of building this thing? It's a booster, isn't it? I could be wrong but I think it is supposed to make the signal louder. A LOT louder. Unity at 9 o'clock sounds very reasonable for a booster to me.
2) This thing has, by design, a fairly insane amount of gain. If you are looking for a medium-gain booster, try leaving out one of the stages. Or better yet, use the second stage as a common drain (aka source follower) buffer. This will also mitigate some other problem (see point 4).
3) You definitely want a log pot, not a linear one for the volume.
4) JFETs get loaded down by resistance (or rather the lack thereof) on their output, especially in common source configuration. So if you plug the Keeley into something with low input impedance (certain mixers, audio interfaces... basically anything that actually expects a microphone to be plugged in), the gain of the second stage will change depending on the volume setting. If you plug it into a guitar amp, this should not occur. Making the second stage a buffer may help a bit.
So in summary, I don't think there is anything wrong with the booster itself and what you describe sounds pretty much like what I would expect by looking at the schematic. But the behavior of the volume knob may depend somewhat on the following device.
Cheers,
Andy