I wasn't sure about the gain pot value but figure it should be C5k.
No problem but you'll result into about 10% (or more) useless rotation..
Q1 gain is roughly set by R3/GAIN pot ratio so for pot set FCCW gain should be less than unity..

The gain pot makes sense to me. My understanding of the R8, C5 and R9, C5 network is a little vague. Let me try and explain what I think is going on here.
R8 and C4 attenuates frequencies below 1.5KHz. R9 and C5 attenuates frequencies below 60Hz. This would be affected by the gain pot setting but I'm ignoring that. The affect of R8 and C4 is to decrease gain for signals below 1.5kHz. R9 and C5 cut the gain again for signals below 60Hz.
Can I ask about the values you chose?
For R8 & R9 values 1% & 10% of GAIN pot respectively, you realize that there isn't "correct" R/C values combination..
(they are strongly dependent on GAIN pot setting..)
I had planned to use 10M for both R4 and R5. This should put the gate at 4.5v. You are suggesting 1M for R5 and about 2M for R4. This would put the gate around 6v. What's the difference here? I commonly see this circuit block biassed at half the power supply.
It depends on Q1 Source resistor value (GAIN pot)..
BS170 has a threashold voltage between 0.8 and 3V (for I
D=1mA)
Worst case scenario is for V
TH = 800mV so we have to add max signal amplitude (like we do for BJTs) or we'll result into negative waveform clipping..

For a grounded Source Mosfet, 1.5V to 2V V
GS should be fine but here we have to add Source voltage due to channel current..
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To make long story short, Mosfets are biased likewise BJTs but with their particular V
TH instead of V
BE..
Second question, the change in these two resistors must affect impedance! Creating a voltage divider here to set bias voltage could generate the same voltage with larger or smaller resistors, what's the difference?
In case you're talking about voltage divider (trimpot) with Gate big biasing resistor, it's OK..
In case of voltage divider like R4 & R5, equivalent impedance is the parallel combination of R4 and R5/(stage gain +1)..
(for a gain of 30 say, R5 is seen at the Gate as about 323k..)
P.S.
An antutored person could hold that Q1 stage gain is set by R5/R1 (80dB!!) which clearly doesn't stand 'cause open-loop gain is lower than closed-loop one..

edit: I'd start with below Q1 configuration:
