> what would happen if both caps in the tone circuit were replaced with jumpers? would it work?
It would not be a "tone control".
It would be a "volume control" (but you already have R15 for that).
C9 R12 cut-off the lows.
R13 C8 cut-off the highs.
Tone knob R14 allows you to select the low-cut, the high-cut, or a range of compromises.
With both caps short, R14 wiper "up" now gets a full-range sound. R14 wiper "down" gets a short-to-ground where C8 is, no signal at all.
You can try it(*).
(*) Do NOT go randomly shortiing caps. Just for example, in this circuit, shorting C2 will put DC onto your guitar. The guitar absorbs current and gets hot. The pot will "scratch" from minor roughness interrupting the large DC voltage. Most likely Q1 will be badly mis-biased and won't amplify. So you may not know you are potentially cooking your pickup. (Actual damage is unlikely, but still not something you should risk.)
For a more dramatic example: short C11 and plug into a fresh battery or a good strong power supply. The battery will get HOT, about the edge of skin-burn. But a strong power supply will cook wires until they melt and burn.
Caps cost several dimes. Jumpers are a penny. If there's a cap in a well-designed circuit, it is probbaly there for a reason. You may disagree with the reason. You find you like this C9 shorted. In THIS case, that's OK. In other cases, stuff can get unhappy or even damaged.